7.19.2013

Solo fanfic

Trying to get back into the groove of writing. Started out easy with some fan fic.


Kessel Run Mechanic



                I packed up my tools and wiped my hands on a rag. This baby still needs some more work, but the Wookie and I will get her ship shape by tomorrow. Time to check the weapons panel.
                Just before I pull out from under the engine panel, loud foots steps and a groan alert me to the return of my fellow repairman.
                "I don't care." I hear the a sharp retort, followed by more inhuman noises. Its him! My heart races when I realize Solo has decided to come see his prized ship. "Skimming the safe zone around a blackhole is the best way to cut down lightyears, and save on fuel."
                I peek out from my spot amid wires and circuits, but the other two are still out of site. They might be in crew quarters now. A muffled bellow confirms my thoughts.
                Hastily I extract myself from the guts of the panel, and dig in my ground crew suit for my compact. I got some new blush and eye shadow from a Cerean Trader yesterday. May be Han wi...
                "Hey kid, I need you check the, what the heck happened to your face?" Han bends his tall frame over, and leans in close to my face. "Did someone force feed you a bark lizard?"
                "U, uuh. n, no. I uh." I look like I've got bark rash?
                Chewbacca grunts and taps Solo's shoulder.
                "Huh?" He turns around, and the Wookie makes a hand motion. "You don't say." He turns his gaze back to me. "You must be tired of knocking all the boys away with a stick. Trying trickery now. I think it'd be better if you just picked a smuck to be your lucky boy toy. Like Crewman Ariz, in bay 19. He looks like a lost puppy when you leave the room." Solo stands up and winks. "You know, if I were a younger man, I'd fancy you for myself."
                "Y, you, you're not much older than me." I sound like a little girl, trying not to cry over spilt milk.
                "Yeah, but those few years are full of dirty deeds. I'm a scoundrel. You need a good honest worker. A man who can at least fix his ship on his own. Chewie and I would be toast if we ever crash landed far from a mechanic." He patted my shoulder, sat down in the pilot seat, and handed my his handkerchief. "I think I saw Ariz working on his ship. He looked like he could use a pair of experienced hands."
                I wiped my face, and handed the handkerchief back. "You don't mind if I don't stay here and help?"
                Chewbacca makes a shooing motion with his hands. I back away from the cockpit, noticing how haggard Solo looks. He's been ducking Jabba for a while, that'll catch up with him soon. Bounty hunters will start showing their ugly faces around. Fights will break out. Maybe I outta spend more time in mechanic bay 19.

5.09.2013

Finally, the final version!

Battlemage

          I have always known war.  Since my tenth year, I have joined the other mages as they ride into battle, casting destruction.  Blue flame flickers over my blue skin, signifying my strengths in fire and death magik, but the potential for all forms flows through my veins.
          As a child, I focused on honing my abilities along with the green boy and yellow girl.  We were taught our sorcery beneath the castle of our Master.  The green boy and I would practice various strategies of magik and the yellow girl would heal us.  Our elder, yellow also, watched us while our sires attended to matters of the court.  She was stern and not above chiding us, something I learned just before my first march.
          “Ello, tell me about the aura-popper,” I demanded from where we stood in the practice yard, my focus on a small flame as it danced across my fingertips.
          “They are called ‘auralplorers’ and you are not to worry about them and I am not ‘Ello’,” she snapped as she monitored the green boy, whom I called “Rock”, while he dug a tunnel below us.  “We are not to be named and you know this.”
          “But what am I to call you when we ride with the others,” I whined, then closed my fist and extinguished the flame.
          “You will call me as everyone else does!  Yellow!”
          “And how will the old yellow know that I am not calling him?” I placed both hands above my head to start a fire in the air above.
          “You will call him Healer, as is his rightful title.”
          “And when will you earn that title?”
          Ello frowned.  “When I have been found worthy; may that be many a day away from now.”
          That day did come and my day came with it.  It was my fourth march, perhaps fifth—all have blended together into a single, never ending event.  I was still young, but Ello had grown into a fine assistant for the adult yellow Healer.  He and a red Battlemage, the woman who bore me into this world, set us to work.
          “Green, raise a wall around the Master and his personal guard,” commanded the Battlemage.  “Blue, rain brimstone on the enemy archers to allow our men a chance to flank them.  Yellows, be ready for the wounded!  They will be here shortly.  I must report to our Master.”
          A sphere of colored wind carried her away moments before arrows pelted us from above.  I blasted flame above us in an attempt to burn them away, but I was not fast enough.  Two arrows cleared the blaze.  One lay on the ground, singed.  The other protruded from the arm of the Healer.  Ello immediately moved to pluck the arrow from the wound, but the Healer stopped her.
          “Save your energy for the fight.  I can tend to myself,” he ordered.  “Remember how I instructed you.  Certain wounds can wait for others that are more pressing.  Look.  The Battlemage returns.”
          The fight pressed on.  I concentrated my efforts on killing the archers.  Anger at myself for not being fast enough boiled in my veins.  I pushed the anger into my hands, let it fuel my blue flame.  Molten lava formed a perfect sphere above the archery group closest to us and plummeted down into their screaming ranks.  Chunks of brimstone followed, finishing those that remained.
          My Master’s Horsemen rode through the newly created gap.  They slashed and skewered our enemy.  Spears of rock skewered up out of the ground in a pattern I knew well from training.  I searched the field for another group to target and a new sensation began to rise in me.  My stomach seemed to plunge down past my feet as sour bile pushed up into my mouth.  A deep pit seemed to open within my body and, inside it, an emptiness called to me.
          I closed my eyes, swallowed, and tried to banish the feeling.  The more I concentrated on the abyss growing inside me, the stronger I was able to feel them; all the dead from the battle.  They were gathered as though they awaited orders from a Commander.  I stood before them in the void, just beyond arm’s reach.  One of the men was familiar and I recognized him as a guard from my Master’s castle.  My hand reached out toward him—
          Crack!
          My eyes snapped open to see the battlefield I stood on, my hand throbbing with pain where I had been struck.
          “Do not!” The Healer hissed in my ear.  He gestured toward the enemy across the field.  “They cannot know the full range of your abilities!  No matter how strong the urge may be, now is not the time to wield your power over death.”
          “How did you know,” I asked, my voice trembling.  “This is the first time I’ve seen them.”
          “I know who you were born of,” he said, then stepped back and motioned to the few remaining skirmishes before us.  “The end is nigh.  Assist where you are able.”
          He walked away, weary.  I stayed where I was, unable to move as I looked over the fallen.  Some of them had been under the command of the Master, others were from the ranks of the enemy.  All of them had been waiting for my mandate in the void.  When the Master gave word that we were to return to camp, I still had not moved.  It was Ello’s pleading voice that brought me out of my fog.
          “Let me care for you!”
          “There is no need,” the Healer wheezed.  “I have dealt with myself sufficiently.”
          “But you are not well!”
          “Of course I’m not well!” the Healer countered harshly.  “I’m dying.  The arrow that pierced my flesh had been poisoned.  Achieved, no doubt, by an orange mage.”
          Next to me, Rock stood, his face lowered, allowing none to glimpse it.  He placed an arm around the Healer.
          “Come Fa—Healer.  I will see to your resting place.”
          The Healer paused and turned to myself and Ello.  Upon her, he bestowed the title of Healer and ordered her to report to the Master immediately.  Her despair was clear, but she bowed her head and started for the castle.  The Healer asked Rock to give him a moment with me.  Rock reluctantly agreed.  Once he stood out of earshot, the Healer regarded me with serenity.
          “You are the successor to a very powerful line.  Refine your abilities, but do so in secret.  You saw, didn’t you?  You understood?  All who have fallen in battle await a Leader, one to pledge their allegiance to.  That is a dangerous power to wield and to spread knowledge of.  You must be careful.  When it is time, you must rise up and control the armies of the dead as their Battlemage.”

4.29.2013

Battlemage v5

Looks like I'll be keeping the name as Battlemage for now. 
The content editing phase is done, on to copy editing!







                I have always known war.  Since my tenth year, I have joined the other mages as they ride into battle, casting destruction.  Blue flame flickers over my blue skin, signifying my strengths in fire and death magik, but the potential for all forms flows through my veins.
                As a child, I focused on honing my abilities along with the green boy and yellow girl.  We were taught our sorcery beneath the castle of our Master.  The green boy and I would practice various strategies of magik and the yellow girl would heal us.  Our elder, yellow also watched us while our sires attended to matters of the court.  She was stern and not above chiding us, something I learned just before my first march.
                “Ello, tell me about the aura-popper,” I demanded from where we stood in the practice yard, my focus on a small flame as it danced across my fingertips.
                “They are called ‘auralplorers’ and you are not to worry about them and I am not ‘Ello’,” she snapped as she monitored the green boy, whom I called “Rock”, while he dug a tunnel below us.  “We are not to be named and you know this.”
                “But what am I to call you when we ride with the others,” I whined then closed my fist and extinguished the flame.
                “You will call me as everyone else does!  Yellow!”
                “And how will the old yellow know that I am not calling him?” I placed both hands above my head to start a fire in the air above.
                “You will call him Healer, as is his rightful title.”
                “And when will you earn that title?”
                Ello frowned.  “When I have been found worthy; may that be many a day away from now.”
                That day did come and my day came with it.  It was my fourth march, perhaps fifth—all have blended together into a single, never ending event.  I was still young, but Ello had grown into a fine assistant for the adult yellow Healer.  He and a red Battlemage, the woman who bore me into this world, set us to work.
                “Green, raise a wall around the Master and his personal guard,” commanded the Battlemage.  “Blue, rain brimstone on the enemy archers to allow our men a chance to flank them.  Yellows, be ready for the wounded!  They will be here shortly.  I must report to our Master.”
                A sphere of colored wind carried her away moments before arrows pelted us from above.  I blasted flame above us in an attempt to burn them away, but I was not fast enough.  Two arrows cleared the blaze.  One lay on the ground, singed.  The other protruded from the arm of the Healer.  Ello immediately moved to pluck the arrow from the wound, but the Healer stopped her.
                “Save your energy for the fight.  I can tend to myself,” he ordered.  “Remember how I instructed you.  Certain wounds can wait for others that are more pressing.  Look.  The Battlemage returns.”
                The fight pressed on.  I concentrated my efforts on killing the archers.  Anger at myself for not being fast enough boiled in my veins.  I pushed the anger into my hands, let it fuel my blue flame.  Molten lava formed a perfect sphere above the archery group closest to us and plummeted down into their screaming ranks.  Chunks of brimstone followed, finishing those that remained.
                My Master’s Horsemen rode through the newly created gap.  They slashed and skewered our enemy.  Spears of rock skewered up out of the ground in a pattern I knew well from training.  I searched the field for another group to target and a new sensation began to rise in me.  My stomach seemed to plunge down past my feet as sour bile pushed up into my mouth.  A deep pit seemed to open within my body and, inside it, an emptiness called to me.
                I closed my eyes, swallowed, and tried to banish the feeling.  The more I concentrated on the abyss growing inside me, the stronger I was able to feel them; all the dead from the battle.  They were gathered as though they awaited orders from a Commander.  I stood before them in the void, just beyond arm’s reach.  One of the men was familiar and I recognized him as a guard from my Master’s castle.  My hand reached out toward him—
                Crack!
                My eyes snapped open to see the battlefield I stood on, my hand throbbing with pain where I had been struck.
                “Do not!” The Healer hissed in my ear.  He gestured toward the enemy across the field.  “They cannot know the full range of your abilities!  No matter how strong the urge may be, now is not the time to wield your power over death.”
                “How did you know,” I asked, my voice trembling.  “This is the first time I’ve seen them.”
                “I know who you were born of,” he said then stepped back and motioned to the few remaining skirmishes before us.  “The end is nigh.  Assist where you are able.”
                He walked away, weary.  I stayed where I was, unable to move as I looked over the fallen.  Some of them had been under the command of the Master, others were from the ranks of the enemy.  All of them had been waiting for my mandate in the void.  When the Master gave word that we were to return to camp, I still had not moved.  It was Ello’s pleading voice that brought me out of my fog.
                “Let me care for you!”
                “There is no need,” the Healer wheezed.  “I have dealt with myself sufficiently.”
                “But you are not well!”
                “Of course I’m not well!” the Healer countered harshly.  “I’m dying.  The arrow that pierced my flesh had been poisoned.  Achieved, no doubt, by an orange mage.”
                Next to me, Rock stood, his face lowered, allowing a glimpse of it to none.  He placed an arm around the Healer.
                “Come Fa—Healer.  I will see to your resting place.”
                The Healer paused and turned to myself and Ello.  Upon her, he bestowed the title of Healer and ordered her to report to the Master immediately.  Her despair was clear, but she bowed her head and started for the castle.  The Healer asked Rock to give him a moment with me.  Rock reluctantly agreed.  Once he stood out of earshot, the Healer regarded me with serenity.
                “You are the successor to a very powerful line.  Refine your abilities, but do so in secret.  You saw, didn’t you?  You understood?  All who have fallen in battle await a leader, one to pledge their allegiance to.  That is a dangerous power to wield and have been known.  You must be careful.  When it is time, you must rise up and control the armies of the dead as their Battlemage.”

4.25.2013

Battlemage?



 Just a quick note:
Yes this is another version of my Battlemage story, but this is more like an origin story. So now I'm thinking I need a subtitle, what do you think?


            I have always known war. Once I reached my tenth year I rode into battle, along with the other mages, casting destruction. My blue skin burns with a similarly hued flame, denoting my natural abilities with fire and death, yet the potential for any magik flows in my veins. Whilst most mages master one of the two skills natural to them, I had full supremacy over both.
            I can remember a time when the other children mages, and I, learned about our sorcery in the old dungeon beneath the castle of our Master. The green boy and I would practice our skills, then the yellow girl would heal us. The yellow girl was the elder of the three of us, and watched us while our sires attended to matters of the court. I particularly recall being chided by the yellow before my first march.
            "Ello, tell me about the aura-poppers." I asked as I focused on a small flame dancing across my fingertips.
            "Auralplorers, and stop calling me that!" She snapped while directing a green boy, slightly older than me whom I called 'Rock', dig a tunnel somewhere below. "It sounds like a name."
            "But what am I to call you when we ride with the others?" I whined. I closed my hand into a fist, extinguishing the flame.
            "You will call me as everyone else does, Yellow!"
            "But what about the old yellow? How will he know I'm not calling him?" I pleaded. I placed both hands above my head, starting a fire in the air above them.
            "He is the Healer, and deserves to be called such." She turned to face me, then cradled her head in her hands, as if in pain. "Now, what did you want to know about the aura hunters?"
            "If they are not black mages, why do people fear them so much?" I spread my hands apart, stretching the fire above from a small spot to a wide plane.
            "Good work! Now bring the edges down around us, shape the flame into a tent." The yellow ordered. I slowly lowered my hands, trying to do as commanded.
            "The majority of green mages have control over Earth magik, but some have power aura magik." She sat down and began drawing symbols on the floor. "Dark green mages can even manipulate another person's aura, which can be used to direct that person as the mage wishes. They are also not the only mages to be feared. Black mages," she continued, "have very strong powers. They have been known to control three, even four types of magik. Also, a black mage is desirable for his offspring." Her fingers wove intersected triangles and hexagons in the dirt. "The brood of a black mage is frequently powerful. They can wield both of the powers that they are born with, and are capable of gaining some skill in the other types of magiks. Necromancers, Auralplorers, Revivers, Beastmasters, Mystiks, and Oracles, these are the pinnacle of their respective sorcery." She glanced up, "Don't bring the edges all the way down or we'll run out air." She turned her attention back to Rock, the green boy, "Are you finished?" She asked.
            "I believe so." He stood just behind her, arms folded behind his back.
            "Wait 10 heart beats, then open up the ground beneath us, just as you practiced." She stood, and whipped back around to me. "Now bring the fire all the way down, keep it in place as long as you can."
            I slowly lowered my arms to my sides, dragging the fire with me. It was difficult for me to stretch the blaze, without spreading it too thin. If it was too thin, it was likely to dissipate, but too thick would quickly go out of control and burn the air out of our lungs. When my hands reached my hips, the flame contacted the floor. I began counting out the heartbeats, feeling the heat intensify with my anxiety. Before I was ready the ground shifted beneath my feet. I tumbled to the ground, and instinctively flung out my arms to balance myself. The fire is torn to shreds by my uncontrolled gestures. My feet sink into soft clay, that rapidly destabilizes into loose sand. Bits of soil and rock filled my vision as I fell. Largish lumps of something bump into my back, knocking the wind out of me. The fire is completely gone. My body stops falling in a heap of sand and rocks.
            "Anyone hurt?" Ello calls out from somewhere to my right.
            "I'm bleeding." Rock answers from farther away.
            I delicately extricate myself from the pile of dirt, "I'm not hurt badly, maybe some small cuts." I look upwards trying to discern the length of the fall.
            "There were too many rocks and large clumps of hard clay, Green. Blue, you need to maintain your fire. Don't worry about falling, you will be healed when the time comes." Ello continued criticizing our actions for quite some time. "As a mage our goal is to assistant our forces, when opposition is found, we fight. It does not matter who we march upon, nor the goal of our campaign, such is not the knowledge privy to mages." Thus was my daily instruction.
            I also recall the day Ello became Healer for our Masters. It had been the fourth, or perhaps the fifth,[V1]  march I accompanied. Grey skinned Swordsmen, Lancers, Horsemen, and Archers moved with precision, attacking an mass of brown skinned fighters. The grown mages, a Yellow Healer, and a Red Battlemage, set us to work.
            "Green, raise up a wall around the Master and his personal guard."Commanded the Battlemage, the woman who bore me[V2] . "Blue, rain brimstone on the enemy archers, that will give our men a chance to flank them. Yellows, be ready for the wounded, they will be here shortly. I will go to the Master to receive any missives he has for us." A sphere of coloured wind carried her away, moments before arrows pelted us from above. Quickly I blasted flame above us, in an attempt to burn them away. Sadly, I was not fast enough, two arrows cleared the blaze. One lay on the ground, singed. The other protruded from the arm of the Healer. Ello, immediately began to pluck the arrow from the wound, but the Healer stopped her.
            "Save your energy for the fight. I can tend to myself." He ordered. "Remember how I instructed you? Certain wounds can wait, but others are more pressing. Look there, I see the Battlemage returning."
            Thus the fight continued, the green and I following the directions of the red Battlemage, and the yellow healing with the guidance of the Healer.
            I concentrated my efforts on killing the archers. Anger at myself, for not being fast enough, boiled in my veins. I pushed that anger into my hands, letting it fuel my flame. Above the archery group nearest us, molten lava formed a perfect sphere, which plummeted down into their ranks. Chunks of brimstone followed on the heels of the lava, quickly finishing off the remnant of the archers. My Master's Horsemen rode through the gap in the forces that opposed us. They slashed and skewered at the brown skinned men. Throughout the battle field, arranged in a familiar pattern, spears of rock spiked up from the ground. As I searched the field for another group to target, a new sensation arose in me. My stomach seemed to plunge down past my feet, and a sour bile pushed up into my mouth. A deep pit seemed to have opened within my body, and inside it an emptiness called to me. I closed my eyes and swallowed, trying to banish the feeling. Yet, as I concentrated on the abyss growing inside me, I felt the dead from the battle. They were gathered, as if awaiting orders from a general. I was within the void now, standing just beyond arm's reach from the fallen. I recognized the man closest as one of the guards from my Master’s castle. I reached my hand out towards him, knowing there was nothing I could do for him. Something crashed down on my hand. My eyes snapped open, bringing me back to the fight at hand.
            “Do not!” The old healer hissed in my ear. He gestured toward the enemy across the field, “They cannot know the full range of your abilities! No matter how strong the urge maybe, now is not the time to wield your power over death.”
            “How did you know?” My voice trembled as I asked. “This is the first time I’ve seen them.”
            “I know that you were born of a Red mage, as well as a Black one.” He stepped back, and motioned to the few remaining skirmishes before us. “The battle is all but over, assist the Green and the Master’s fighters while the young Yellow and I care for the wounded.” He looked ragged and weary as he walked away.
            At last, the Master sent word that we were to return to his camp. Ello pleaded with the Healer. "Let me care for you now."
            "There is no need," The healer wheezed, "I have dealt with myself sufficiently."
            "But you are not well!" The younger exclaimed.
            "Of course I'm not well!" The Healer countered harshly. "I'm dying."
            "How?" I demanded, Rock and I had kept all other attacks at bay.
            "The arrow." He answered. "It had been poisoned, courtesy of an Orange mage."
            Rock lowered his face, "Come, Fa..., Healer. I will see to your resting place."
            With the death of the Healer, the yellow garnered her title, and I lost the only other person who knew anything about my bloodline. Many had fallen that day, and even though I knew the Master’s men were more difficult to replace, the death of the old mage weighed heavy on my mind. What had his death gained? More prominence for Ello, and a place at court for her? What had the battle gained? Nothing that I knew of, it was all a waste, all the death was for naught. It felt wrong somehow, that a mage could be tossed aside as if he were but a threadbare coat.
Even if it meant forsaking my power, and my duty to the Master, I would not let the same happen to me.