Hello! I'm back!
As you can see from the heading of this post, I've even come back with a short story. Sorry, I still haven't finished City of Walls, or The adventures of the Scarlet Slash. This story is part of a larger story (dare I say a novel) about an alien invasion. I've been working on it off and on for years, and still don't have a title. The working title for this particular piece is
On the Lee of the Mountain
The goats bleated in disapproval at
the interruption to their meal as a tall, thin woman trudged through their
midst. Dust from the trail sullies the hem of her black, embroidered robe, and
she growls. "Foolish, selfish, lazy man! Sends his own sister to the high
pasture to retrieve his goats. Payment for his bride!" Another cloud of
dust sprang up as her boot struck the ground. In the distance a low clap of
thunder rumbled.
"If Papa were here, you would be
living in your own home. You would have your own goats. You would also collect
them yourself, as a proper man should! But no, you take your sister's home, and
her dowry for yourself!" Tears hovered at the edges of her eyes, and a
hand rubs the moisture away. "Go ahead, take my home, and livelihood, but
the day you come for our father's swords, I will cut your hands off."
Still moist, her hand lowers to the hilt jutting from her belt on her right
side. The palm cradles the worn leather grip, and jaw muscles clench in pain.
Her shoulders droop, and her hand
leaves the sword, as a goat begins to chew the grass beside the trail. With a
slow sigh, the woman begins to gather the four goats called for in the letter
her brother's bride sent.
"I wonder how long it will take for
Razzak to decide I must get married?" She asked the goat as she herded it
back towards some others.
Thunder boomed through the mid morning
sky. As the ground rumbled beneath the woman's feet, she turned away from the
path leading to the village. As her eyes searched the clouds looming over the
mountain peak, a dark speck burst forth. It fell from the sky, as a ball falls
from a child's hand, onto the lee of the mountain.
Unlike a child's plaything, the object
smote the mountain like the hand of a god. Soil and trees erupted into the air.
The sound of a whip crack echoed down the side of the mountain, falling on the
ears of the woman rooted to the ground. The goats, which had been milling
about, scattered down the trail or towards the edges of the pastures. While her
sole purpose flew with the wind, she stood as a statue. Down the mountainside,
shrugging aside boulders, a sphere of black rolled. The noise of rumbling
filled the air continuously. Larger and larger it grew, until it was almost the
size of a small hut. Rocks the size of a man's head were crushed to dust under
the weight of the thing. A larger boulder, the size of a tall goat, sat
directly in the path of destruction, possibly a hundred meters away from the
brunette woman. With speed like a horse, the round force of devastation struck
the boulder, and with all the agility of a fleeing steed, leapt into the air.
In the moments while the orb flew through the air, the statue of a woman
returned to life. With nary a trace of emotion, or thought on her narrow face,
her stance shifted into one of a practiced swordsman. Her shoulders squared,
her legs spread wide, and her hands gripped the sword hilts belted on either
hip. When the artifact from the heavens smashed into the ground, it landed a
mere 20 paces away from the woman. Her eye lids flashed closed and her whole
frame tensed as dirt and rocks showered down on her.
For the space of three heartbeats
silence filled the air. Quietly, almost apologetically, thunder rumbled on the
windward side of the mountain.
The woman opened her bright green
eyes, and gazed at the mystery from the sky. An orb of perfect symmetry, and of
the color of shadows from the darkest caves rested impeccably still before her.
Despite the objects repeated abuses to the mountain, the surface was smooth and
unmarred by scratch or blemish. Her hands relaxed and dropped to her sides. A
small crease appeared between her thick eyebrows, and she stepped slowly,
cautiously forward. As she approached, the thunder returned to its previous
boisterous state. Stopping six paces away from the sphere, the woman could see
the image of herself imposed upon the onyx surface. Tall, thin, almost frail
looking, she appeared. Then her brows lowered, her face stiffened, her nostrils
flared, and her green eyes squinted. Her thin lips pursed into a tight small
frown, and she spat upon the ground before her.
"Demon, or God, I have not fled
in fear!" Her voice rang out in soft, flowing Urdu, echoing along the
mountain. "I care not for games," her right hand reached for the hilt
on her lift hip again, "show me your purpose! Or have the decency to
return the goats for my brother!"
Once she finished speaking, her image
brightened into a pillar of light. With the sound of hummingbirds wings in the
air, the pillar of light slid forward. Thin wisps of cloud hissed around the
edges of the pillar, and the sphere opened itself. The portion that had opened
slid forward until it touched the ground. The clouds dissipated, and a short,
thin, man-shaped figure exited the orb.
It was covered in small delicate
scales of a light green color. The top of its head was adorned with two upright
fins. Listless eyes gazed at the woman, and a narrow vertical slit below them opened
and closed. A watery yellow substance dribbled out and down to the chest. One
limb, ending with a small hand with squat webbed fingers,
reached
across the chest to clutch the other to its side, in the unmistakable manner of
one holding an arm in pain. Two more limbs ending with long finger-like webbed feet
grasped the portion of the orb which lay on the ground. The sound of leaves
rustling in the wind brought the woman's head back up.
Once again the creature had opened its
mouth, and with eyes wide open, a word hissed forth.
"Rescue." The creature spoke a word of the nearly forgotten
language belonging to the woman's ancestors. "Ako empo rescue akosa?"
When the creature had finished speaking, it closed its eyes and fell forward.
Immediately the woman let go of her
sword hilt, rushed forward, and caught the creature in both arms. A clap of
thunder roared nearby, and the ground shook again, but the creature's back had arrested
the woman's attention.
Covering the entirety of the torso was
a curved, metallic item. While grey in color, the whole surface was smooth
except for a smattering of etchings in the middle. The marks were engraved in a
series of lines, squiggles, and circle. The woman's eyes focused on the inscription
in the middle. Slowly, gently, the woman lowered the creature to the ground. She
then crept around until the opening of the sphere was at her back. Crouching
down, she reached out a hand with long slender fingers and traced four
particular symbols. Simultaneously her lips mouthed a word from childhood
stories.
"Fairy Varita?" A noise like
gurgling water came from beyond the sphere. "Ako empo makadungog akosa?
Inepo Muziri, jhe devil yul jhe Jhuntiern ako dinhi
sa
kill empo." The sounds stopped as a second man-shaped creature appeared.
This creature had smooth, deep blue
skin, as opposed to scales. Short horns adorned the crest of its head, and
spikes ran down the sides of the upper and lower limbs. The hands and feet of
the new comer were eerily similar to the creature lying prone on the ground.
Yet the new comer was not holding itself in a gesture of pain. Instead it held
two small glimmering objects. The first was simply a small box, while the other
was the familiar shape of a knife.
Upon seeing the knife, the woman not
only grip the hilts of her swords, but she unsheathed them, and brought them
forward in one graceful motion. With her swords in position to guard and
attack, she stepped over the creature lying prone on the ground; placing
herself between it and the armed stranger.
Its eyes narrowed into slits, as a cat
in the noonday sun. The lipless mouth opened and a sound like gurgling water
issued forth again. "Jamut, kneel atubangan jhe demon."
The woman opened her mouth, closed it,
then opened it again. She spoke in the tongue of her ancestors. "You name
yourself a demon." The words came slow, and haltingly. "The one
behind me you call fairy." She raised the point of her right hand blade
and leveled it at the creature's throat. "As the sacred blossoms I was
named for, I Bambariush, give my life for the
mountain. I may die this day, but so shall you."
"So
you know the Kalasha language. Your kind have not yet forgotten our kind."
The horned creature gestured with the knife at the creature behind her.
"Soon the world shall know us again. Serve me." The horned creature
squeezed the box, then tossed it to the ground.
"No."
The bright
orange eyes of the new comer narrowed, and the creature charged forward with
its knife held high.
Bambariush quickly raised the sword in her left hand,
blocking the knife and pushing it away. In concert with this move, she darted
the blade in her right hand downward. The attacker kept its weapon in its
claws, and blocked the woman's other blade with the spikes along its arm.
Thrust and
parry, block and slash, on they fought for a short time. Both made glancing
hits. The assailant circled around the woman, but Bambariush kept herself between the demon and the fairy.
The horned
creature ran at the woman, knife poised for attack. But this time she stepped
to the side, with her left foot crossing over to her right. Her knees bent,
lowering her center of gravity, and her whole body rotated with the movement.
She bent her left arm at the elbow, keeping it tucked close to her body. Her
right arm was straightened outward, with her wrist at an angle. As she
completed her rotation, she slashed upward at the aggressor's wrist. She then thrust
the left blade into the creature's lower abdomen. Pushing her swords directly
into the creature, she lifted it almost half a meter off. the ground. As it descended
towards the ground, Bambariush spread her arms wide,
slashing the right blade across the smooth hide of the chest, and the left
blade cutting through the lower torso. Yellow ichor and streaming viscera
spilled out of the creature who had called itself a demon. The woman stood over
the creature, her chest and shoulders heaving.
Slowly, her
eyes never leaving the demon, she wiped her blades, then returned them to their
scabbards. A thin yellow liquid gurgled out of the its mouth. With the careful
movements of a dying man, it rolled onto its side and crawled towards the small
box it had tossed before the fight. The horned creature failed at its last
task.
Bambariush
retrieved the box, stowing it in a pocket of her robe. She turned back to the
wounded creature which bore a parcel bearing the word fairy.
"The exiled
one must see this."
Intriguing. 2 points I feel obligated to mention, (1) You've got mixed tenses in the first paragraph, but then this is an early edit and that is easily fixed (I'm a bugger for this myself). (2) Some gremlin has got in and played with your formatting, this is not a writing problem, it could just by my browser.
ReplyDeleteJust the right number of things you have not explained for me, plus goats (the goats in my next piece were written before I read this, but they do not actually appear), goats are good.
The gremlins come with blogger. Sometimes they go away after a day, I may have to go into the html and chase them off with a broom.
DeleteMixed tenses are the bane of this author's existence.
baaahh
I keep trying to figure out a way to explain how to knock that off that makes sense and is easy to remember in one of those "aha!" moment type ways. I got nothing. Though that does give me an idea. lol *goes off to the TT forums*
DeleteA way to explain tenses? Is that what you meant?
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